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<p>[QUOTE=&quot;lucyray, post: 1131933, member: 24565&quot;]Trying again, I wrote this wrong, after looking back..</p><p><br /></p><p><br /></p><p>H8,&nbsp; Nice post.&nbsp; FWIW, each of us hear and read and speak (interpret) words with differing cadence.&nbsp; I say potato, you say &quot;puhtahtoh&quot; (geez,&nbsp; don&#039;t know how to spell that phonetically!)&nbsp; So for me, my line of &quot;Is it that I increase my stack&quot; has a three beat cadence (feet) (Placing my accent on &#039;that&#039;, &#039;increase&#039;, and &#039;stack&#039;.&nbsp; And, I also can see that your suggestion might be better (cadence might then be &#039;to&#039;, &#039;increase&#039; and &#039;stack&#039;.&nbsp; Perhaps either, in a sing song way..</p><p><br /></p><p>Anyway, no matter.&nbsp; My limerick for the contest was titled &quot;Mercury&quot;, and <i>this</i> one was for fun.&nbsp; Hope you&#039;ll read that one when you have the time.&nbsp;&nbsp; I enjoy this stuff, and it was in fact very nice of you to write to educate me and everyone else.&nbsp; Truly, you did that kindly enough.&nbsp; </p><p><br /></p><p>Remember, this is to be fun.&nbsp; Heaven forbid everyone begins correcting everyone else!!&nbsp; And, I DO want to be corrected when I can learn from it.&nbsp; Critique is how we learn (how I learn)</p><p><br /></p><p>Lucy[/QUOTE]</p><p><br /></p>

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