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<p>[QUOTE=&quot;Conder101, post: 1747529, member: 66&quot;]I know you are trying and I applaud your effort, but the writing needs work. Have someone read it back to you aloud and see how it sounds, then try improving it.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>I&#039;m sure you know exactly what you are trying to say and for that reason your post may seem fine to you, but it comes across as disjointed to others. (This is why it is always a good idea to have someone else proofread your writing if possible. Since you know what you are saying your mind tends to ignore the errors.)[/QUOTE]</p><p><br /></p>

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