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<p>[QUOTE=&quot;gunsmoke, post: 205449, member: 6896&quot;]Just Carl, I thought that was a well done report. I was especially fascinated reading about someone buying a 1916-D Mercury dime. That&#039;s my dream coin, which I will&nbsp; never own. And I hope you will continue to post your adventures in coin-show land. </p><p><br /></p><p>I hope you won&#039;t mind if I make a suggestion. Paragraph your story next time. Every three, four or five sentences, press &quot;Enter&quot; twice. That breaks a big, forbidding block of text down into bite-sized paragraphs, giving the reader&#039;s eye places to rest. If you do this, I believe that you will have more readers and that they will be more likely to read your whole piece. </p><p><br /></p><p>And when I say press &quot;Enter&quot; twice, I don&#039;t mean to do it blindly. Follow the logic of your text. There are places where it makes sense to start a new paragraph. </p><p><br /></p><p>Just Carl, I&#039;m sorry to give you advice you didn&#039;t ask for, but as a lifelong writer and editor, I just can&#039;t resist trying sometimes. I have good intentions (and I know what the road to hell is paved with). Thanks.[/QUOTE]</p><p><br /></p>

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