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Message:: [QUOTE="GoldFinger1969, post: 2072474, member: 73489"]Josh, a good effort and not bad.  I'm not as fussy on non-material errors, however, if you want to improve the style in the future:<ol> <li>On lengthy posts, copy them in MS Word and use the Spellcheck feature. Once corrected and once reviewed by your eyes, then post it on CoinTalk.  </li> <li>Proofing with Spellcheck and your eyes in Word will then make a final proof once you post on CoinTalk much easier. Your eyes will see it as new writing and not tend to 'glaze over' any obvious errors.</li> <li>Strive for short sentences and short paragraphs.  No sentence should be longer than 2-3 lines.  No paragraph should be more than 10-12 lines (6-8 sentences).</li> <li>Watch extra spaces between paragraphs.</li> <li>Don't be afraid to use bold face, color text, or underlining to highlight key points.</li> </ol>I liked the way you integrated some pics into the prose, good job ! <img src="styles/default/xenforo/clear.png" class="mceSmilieSprite mceSmilie50" alt=":happy:" unselectable="on" unselectable="on" />[/QUOTE]