Introducing the Kennedy Half - spelled with two 'n's

http://www2.mrbrklyn.com/kenedy.html

 

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At the risk of being called rude . . . The first sentence has an error:

Kennedy was assassinated in November 1963, not 1964.

 

Thanks

Ruben

 

You are most welcome.

 

fixed

 

Ruben , Good Job. Cheryl

 

I have one observation/suggestion. When you talk about the reverse being not as nice as the barber halve, you are expressing an opinion. Everything else is factual information and the appearance of an opinion at that point seems out of place. Otherwise, it's a good job.

 

Nice job Ruben , I can actually understand it , JK .
rzage

 

Ruben, one other quick change that should be made in your first sentence ... "... the Government had decided they had to immoralize the former President ...." You certainly mean immortalize...I'm not sure there is anything immoral going on here.

 

ruben please read
http://www.coinresource.com/guide/photograde/pg_50cKennedy.htm

http://www.tulving.com/50ckenn.html

http://www.tulving.com/50ckenn.html

Cheryl

 

They sanitized him, but immoralizing him wasn't possible over time.

Ruben