Ok I've whittled this down to the basics I think. If interested take a look at the doc and let me know how it works. https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzltHIGKNffweC1mUVJuVTBmazA
Well, I started reading this morning and finished this afternoon. No I am not a slow reader. This thing called a job interrupted me. I see you spent some time on writing this article. I applaud you for that. It is well written. You knew there was a but coming. There needs to be an opening paragraph which basically explains whether a person has the no "S" coin. Any further reading of the paper would only expound on that paragraph. Also including the other no mint mark coins would be a bonus. I think if you did that and pared it down a little it could be a cornerstone of a sticky.
I think you read the old one. Read the one I posted today (post #22), if you want that is. I think you'll find I took care of both your suggestions. And it's pared down from 7 pages to 3. I really appreciate you're reading the original, and more importantly giving me your honest opinion. It helps to have the feedback and critiques.