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  1. Captainkirk

    Captainkirk 73 Buick Riviera owner

    Beach Glass by Kirk Dobson

    I woke this morning on a beach,
    Lying in the sand.
    A piece of purple beach glass
    was nestled in my hand.

    I wondered where it came from,
    sat up and looked around,
    and there were many more of them
    scattered on the ground.

    My curiosity awoke,
    my consciousness soon followed.
    I slowly crept out of the sand
    my body weight had hollowed.
    The sun was rising in the East,
    I walked that way and followed.

    I seemed to be in some strange land,
    that was not sea or wood.
    The sea was wet, the woods were dark,
    this middle place was good.

    The trees were leaning towards the sea,
    their roots caressed the water.
    The water rushed in toward the trees,
    with all their driftwood fodder.


    There were some boulders in my way
    I could not go around.
    I skipped along the tops of them
    then floated to the ground.

    I trudged ahead still heading East,
    not knowing where I headed.
    Not daring to turn left or right,
    toward areas I dreaded.

    I spotted a small silver fish
    slap-flapping in the sand,

    I carefully bent down
    and gently placed him in my hand.

    His flapping ceased, he stared at me
    in quiet desperation.
    "Please help me" he said, in a form
    of fish communication.

    I took him to the water and
    I softly set him free.
    I never will forget him,
    though he won't remember me.

    I started walking East again,
    then noticed, with a frown,
    the sun was headed Westward now.
    I stopped and turned around.

    At once, I noticed something gray
    was splashing in the waves.
    A mouse was floundering in the surf,
    and badly needed saved.

    I boldly walked into the surf,
    my first time off the land.

    I carefully bent down
    and gently placed him in my hand.

    I carried him up to the beach,
    then towards the leaning trees.
    I set him gently on the ground,
    he shook a bit and sneezed.

    He looked me straight into my eyes,
    now, here's the strangest part,
    I felt a wave of gratitude
    down deep inside my heart.

    A little further Westerly,
    I came upon a bird.
    Jumping and squawking noisily,
    and acting quite absurd.




    Her leg was tangled in a line
    some fisherman had tossed.
    If I could not remove it now
    her leg would sure be lost.

    I made some gentle noises
    and approached her in the sand.

    I carefully bent down,
    and gently placed her in my hand.

    I cautiously removed the line
    around the seagull's leg.
    She slowly limped away from me,
    towards her nest and egg.

    I smiled at her proudly,
    I think she smiled back.
    My heart was filled with joy again,
    I hoped it wouldn't crack.


    I tried to find the little fish
    who's existence I had spared,
    but all I saw was something
    sparkling purple lying there.

    As I looked down I saw a piece
    of beach glass in the sand.

    I carefully bent down
    and gently placed it in my hand.

    The sun was moving faster now
    careening toward the West,
    but I could not keep up with it,
    although I tried my best.

    Eventually, I came upon a
    depression in the sand.
    I recognized it as the place
    I'd entered beach glass land.

    I lie down on the sand that had
    been moistened by my tears,
    I realized this walk had taken
    over eighty years.

    the leaning trees were driftwood now,
    the boulders turned to sand.
    My crippled fingers barely hold
    the beach glass in my hand.

    And now I will drift off to sleep,
    as we all must, my friend,
    and only hope tomorrow
    I'll wake up in beach glass land.



    As I lie in my depression,
    Softly sparkling in the sand,

    God carefully bent down
    and gently placed me in His hand.
     
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  4. jello

    jello Not Expert★NormL®

    Good but long for a poem.
     
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  6. trussxx1

    trussxx1 New Member

    capitankirk liked you poem thought you might find this interesting.
    Use to Be


    I was once the ocean,

    But now I am only the sand.

    I was once the wind,

    But now I am only a wisp of a cloud.

    I was once a great mountain

    But now I am only the dust at its feet.

    I was once a great oak tree,

    But now I am just a seed.




    By

    trussxx


    1996
     
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