Bad Coin Poem: Silver Dollars

Silver Dollars​

Oh the silver,
In the form of a dollar
When some people get them,
They just want to holler.

Usually people buy silver dollars,
When their called “Junk”
And for investment,
They will buy a hunk

Silver dollars were known,
A lot in the west.
And right know they are known,
As the best.

Silver Dollars are what people want,
In their collection.
But you better put them in a safe,
Just for protection.

 

Log in or Sign up to hide this ad.

Is that you Robert Frost?

I know one!

There once was a man from nantucket..

 

Come on, my poems aren't that good!

 

Agreed

 

Did he kick the bucket or just give up and say..........!

Chris

 

Hmmm....let's go for a learning moment. I challenge you, for you next poem, create one in iambic pentameter with rhyming couplets.

 

Dime Guy didst love the prose and verse.

His posts were deep yet often terse.

 

Hey!

What?

 

Are you that bored? but still very funny

 

I'm a kid, and I like coins and poem. I thought I'd show people my poems just for fun.

 

No one here is qualified to judge you on your poetry. It ryhmed, so I think thats a good thing? Unless of course we are talking about Haikus.

 

I just want you to look at it.

 

coinlover,

Iambic pentameter is a poem consisting of ten syllables. Rhyming couplets is simply making every line rhyme with the previous line. For instance,

Lady Liberty coinage is a dream
On every denomination it seems
But in '46, mint's horrible crime
I can't believe! They took her off the dime!

 

lol...seldom have people who are familiar with my writing/posts have they called it terse.

 

This is your secound? You are really good! I love the one about wheat pennies if that was yours! :fro:

 

Yep that was me. I made more justLook up poem, not a lo of people made poems.

 

I will and I will leave feedback!