ryanbrooks

Hey everyone

Okay for Round 4, this is what I was looking for:

1. At the beginning of the passage, I said the bike was "brand new", then towards the end, I said it was "aged".

2. At the beginning, I said it took 30 minutes to ride the bike there, then a "couple minutes" to ride back.

3. I said Kelsey was adopted in 2005 and 23 years old, which would of made her adopted at 19.... you can't be up for adoption in an orphanage at 19 years old.

4. I also said Kelsey was at collage, so how would I of been introduced to her?

5. Betsy was in a mental institute, so how was I introduced to her either?

6. Near the beginning, I said it was Tuesday, then said "tomorrow was Thursday".

7. I said that the "new" born baby was three years old. 3yr old's are not newly born.



And the winner who takes 1st place....... congrats to Treashunt! He was able to catch EVERYTHING!

And the winner who takes 2nd place...... congrats to Duke Kavanaugh! He only missed a single thing.

Winners, please send me your addresses and your prizes will go out first thing tomorrow morning, first class.

A thank you to all of you who participated in my contest. I hope you had more fun that it was time consuming. I hope to have contests like these every month or so, so keep in tune!

Thank you all once again!

- Ryan -