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01-17-2009, 08:42 PM
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| | CEO of Brooklyn
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01-17-2009, 08:45 PM
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At the risk of being called rude . . . The first sentence has an error: Quote: |
When President John F Kennedy was assassinated in November of 1964 . . .
| Kennedy was assassinated in November 1963, not 1964.
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01-17-2009, 08:46 PM
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Originally Posted by Hobo At the risk of being called rude . . . The first sentence has an error:
Kennedy was assassinated in November 1963, not 1964. | Thanks
Ruben
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01-17-2009, 08:47 PM
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You are most welcome.
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01-17-2009, 08:47 PM
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01-17-2009, 08:48 PM
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Ruben , Good Job. Cheryl |
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01-17-2009, 11:04 PM
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I have one observation/suggestion. When you talk about the reverse being not as nice as the barber halve, you are expressing an opinion. Everything else is factual information and the appearance of an opinion at that point seems out of place. Otherwise, it's a good job.
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01-17-2009, 11:20 PM
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Nice job Ruben , I can actually understand it , JK .
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01-17-2009, 11:21 PM
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Ruben, one other quick change that should be made in your first sentence ... "... the Government had decided they had to immoralize the former President ...." You certainly mean immortalize...I'm not sure there is anything immoral going on here.
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01-18-2009, 12:14 AM
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Originally Posted by Numan Ruben, one other quick change that should be made in your first sentence ... "... the Government had decided they had to immoralize the former President ...." You certainly mean immortalize...I'm not sure there is anything immoral going on here. | They sanitized him, but immoralizing him wasn't possible over time.
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01-17-2009, 11:40 PM
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